While absolutely linguistically correct, your excellent translation still resembles several randomly generated phrases without any rational relationship to each other. Or is that the point?
How can one find apprehension in the words of the Old High Warten. I have seen your facility and does not look inviting. I hope it is much more capacious then it appears, I believe your bulkheads will be stretched to their Marginal Limits here Shortly.
But I do have to say that your definition of the Hyena (carnivorous mammals of the family Hyaenidae of Africa and Asia) is slightly lacking, the important fact neglected is the Hyena wayfar in packs.