Don't get me wrong.... your point is well taken. AND I think it is well written and I LIKE it! But it lacks the meat and you just mentioned one peice of good meat that is lacking. If ONLY that was in there it would make it MUCH better Bio. It is a good start... in fact it is an excellent start... but verifiable facts are needed ... at least one or two facts and it will be fine.
p.s. ur doing a great job on DD here... and helping us keep up to date...thankx!
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