Wow! I actually understood all of that one on the *first* read. Mommy, I'm scared!
That's a good approach to at least somewhat incorporate into the next MDC, if we have one. As I pointed out when the current one was introduced, I tried to anticipate all the problems and failings of it but knew full well that most of them wouldn't be apparent to me until much later. I knew it'd be flawed, but we'd take advantage of the knowledge of those flaws in the next one.
In addition to Jill Jail, there was Fort Bob.