Replies to post #3548 on The Next Online Brokerage - Built By You

[gotmilk]

re: "... and we believe you have little to no exposure to"

Good point, and even if Donald had limited exposure to the Internet,
the following grouping of words is a turn-off to anyone with such
a huge ego as Trump: "you have little to no"

But thats pales to the message Trump would receive to describe the caliber
of thoroughness the sender of the letter possesses: "... and we believe"

"we believe you have" versus "you have"

Not only are you tell Trump that you are guessing, and don't know,
but this reflects a wider issue of an incorrect presentation, as in,
relationship to sender & receiver.

Trump does not need you (or) stand in line behind a hord of others
that believe as you believe, I got something good for you.

Don't tell Trump you have been a success.

Don't give Trump a history lesson on your success story.

Thats for the reality tv programs, a.k.a. entertainment.

Research each person, be it Buffet, Trump and others, and for each
identify where in their businesses OCS has a place or fit, and then upfront
identify the how OCs can fit in or add to or enhance that place,
and yes some may have no formal hard or soft Internet place, and if so,
explain the why it can be inserted, and the benifits of doing it.

That letter as it now stands is a one size fits all, and the fit is poor.

That private mailing address is a bunch of hooie if you think Trump will pick up
and read them envelope letters, or e-mail messages.

The person that gave it to Ken, gave to Ken the appearance that they have
an inside track to Trump, which was given to them by someone wanting to give
that person that they have an inside track to Trump, which was...

You want to get Trumps attention, then do it in a manner that he would do it.

"Its the art of the deal." Which I never read, but I'm sure its simple,
as one form of it was how Matt created IH, and later got SI.

Look for a place where people "feed" and lay out da free food,
but always factor in that they really is no free lunch Virginia.

Want to get Trump to feed on OCS, then locate where in his empire there exist
a part that can grow and expand using the "Internet" of OCS.

That part has a person reporting to a person reporting eventually to Trump,
and everyday they wake up they hope for a "gift" of something that
they can use to present to their boss that they have a think of value,
a.k.a. will increase the worth of the part of Trump's empire that they are
employeed at, and this will make them shine, and that ripples up the chain
until Trump get that report that Trump Division XYZ increased profits 25%.

From above, "we believe you have" versus "you have"

Find out what Trump has, and move the OCS opportunity in front of it,
where the it you researched enough to then be able to make them an offer
they want to obtain.

But you got to locate the it.

And that it place has a person as talented and hungry as Mr. Trump.

Thats where the letter goes to, and it opens upfront first line with:

Mr/Ms Smith,
Your business is...
Your business does...
Your business can do more (not better a.k.a. no negative words)
My business [OCS] has a fit in yours to increase or make more productive
or allow your to branch out/into...

Doug