Replies to post #553372 on Tornado Alley (PROG)

[newmedman]

We shouldn't be interested in this, but it IS sort of fascinating. We are all hopeless.

I know. That's why I never brought it to the board, especially with everything else going on in the last week. I figured it was the least of our worries but I was privately LMAO at the people in social media absolutely skewering her.

https://newsletter.anamariecox.com/archive/notes-on-your-american-canto-draft/

Everyone deserves a good editor.

Olivia,

Thank you so much for this. I’m impressed with the scope of your ambition and everything here has real potential.

As you will see, I started doing line edits and then they fell off a bit as I realized that perhaps we need to have a larger discussion about the direction that this is heading.

General notes on the writing itself (if you want to start tinkering)....