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Re: firefight4 post# 50666

Sunday, 12/04/2005 12:41:16 PM

Sunday, December 04, 2005 12:41:16 PM

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Improvements to the flyer - 1. xrl.us forwarding link for the flyer would look more professional and short.
2. If he is going to use that paint bucket site, I would recommend he cleanup all the unnecessary pics like, The Rocket launch, the careometer, and other duplicate items for instance different views of the Kiosk, The pic of dwyatt with his face cut out looking like he is guilty of committing a crime of some sort with two gameznflix disks in his hand. Pick the best pics to post
And think and ask the question "If I was an average customer looking at the flyer and paint bucket site for the first time what should stay and what should be deleted to prevent confusion for the potential client.
And what does and what doesn't create awareness. Keep it simple stupid and to the point. Every heard of the expression?




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