Philip,
I also like this. I would consider Bluzie's comment on making it perhaps a bit more concise, but that is more style rather than substance.
You articulated the emotional and factual aspects expertly.
You should submit this. Not so that people know how incensed the LTW holders are but to put a personal touch on things. I don't think this aspect of the LTWs has been made as apparent in comparison with, say, the WAMUQ.
Perhaps people think that the LTWs are a bunch of hedge funds! This at least demonstrates that it's individual investors who are being trampled upon.
In short, great job!
Best,
Jared