Wouv.. This is an excellent piece of writing. Excellent!
Here is one which might be typo:
"......We would like to know how much "smart money" (the amounts were too large to be retail withdrawals) was withdrawn from JPM at this time?...."
Should this read as:
"............. was withdrawn from WMI at this time..."
Would you also consider adding couple more sentences to the paragraph "In regards to the “Global Understanding....." How could this POR is outrageous, tax returns, even firing Rosen etc.
I am pretty bad at writing otherwise I would try myself.
Thank you so much for all of your effort! Best Climber