Oh yeah that's AWESOME! Keep it all bolded, underlined & REPEAT the share structure another 1/2 DOZEN times or so. It just looks SO GREAT & is SO BIG I'm sure people need to see it THIS WAY -- many more times, in order to DIGEST how many shares are out & HOW MANY MORE are forthcoming!!
Keep up the bang up work there...
Now I see where CornerStoneD_Marketing Jeff L(oser) & No BRAIN Shane fit into this group!!
You were right all along Mick,... this is the way to go!!
Buuut maaaaybe -- I don't know how you feel about advice & suggestions (after all you ARE the artist), but maybe just ADD the Share Structure another6-12 times!!