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Re: kaddy27 post# 58067

Monday, 08/28/2006 4:43:35 PM

Monday, August 28, 2006 4:43:35 PM

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No, the word "IN" is still missing ON THE FIRST LINE between "special services" and "the" (should read "special services IN the areas..."). And as others pointed out, it is a run-on sentence and needs to be broken up into several brief sentences to be more coherent.



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