I can see that but if there is one thing I've learned in writing it's that you read, re-read, read again, have your friends read, have your friend's friends read and then re-read it all over again. Of course, all of this should be done BEFORE you turn it in for a grade!
I'm still disappointed in what I see from this website and from what is apparently representing SLJB. Having a connection or being cool with someone doesn't make poor IR okay.