Hold on....Ill wake my 10 yr old just to show that HE could do it better. (shaking head)
Yanno....I seldom am critical of spelling and writing techniques because we all have our separate strengths.
The side of my brain that should know how to read spread sheets and do simple accounting principles has the capabilities of Forest Gump on acid...soo...
Soooo...while it is excusable to write an absurd paragraph like that it is inexcusable when you know that a billion eyes are just waiting to eviscerate you to make it public without double checking.