Well done! Only thing I'd change is the conclusion that EPA levels don't matter - IIRC those who achieved the highest levels had moderately better results in R-IT, and we know from ANCHOR that 4 g of EPA does much better at reducing multiple biomarkers than 2 g did, including Apo(b).
You should send this to AMRN IR with an additional note that you keep finding articles like this bashing R-IT, and ask them why AMRN cannot produce positive articles by having the media interview R-IT supporters, and I don't mean Dr. Bhatt - I mean docs unrelated to AMRN and R-IT.