Replies to post #17052 on The Rising Influence of Rising Affluence

[DewDiligence]

[OT/quiz]—Your sentence does read a little better, but the usage error I was referring to was the phrase, “astute point.”

It’s wrong to attribute astuteness to the word, “point,” an inanimate object; rather, the astuteness belongs to the author of the article—or, less formally, to the article itself.