Hi Highwayman4life
Your content below is excellent, but I think the flow can be improved.
I think you should move the last section from the bottom of the letter to the top. I read maybe 3-5 sentences of the letter and then automatically transitioned to skimming. It was not clear to me (within 2 mins) what you were requesting or what Dr. Segiel should take from this letter and what he should do next.
Your content below is great, but I think it would be much more effective if these new advancements were positioned as
"How patients are able to MORE EASILY gain access to DCVax-L" vs back in November 2013. This includes the German Hospital Exemption, the 10 Hospitals, and the UK National Initiatives + the FDA compassionate use approval.
In addition, we should de-emphasizes anything that relates to "Pumping" of the stock or new business developments. If new developments can't be positioned as helping more patients faster, then I don't think it should be mentioned.
I don't believe Media doesn't cares about the fact that NWBO is the 1st biotech to obtain HE. But media would DROOL AND SCRAMBLE after a story where a cancer patient got rejected by the FDA but got treatment through HE.
These are just my 2 cents ...
Thanks for doing this.