A Good Laugh
AB, you have a point. But for me, as long as they confirmed the investment and the Board seat, I’m okay with the lack of financial detail in this PR since its purpose is to trumpet the fact that they are launching their campaign at the Sundance festival, which I think is a pretty interesting choice.
My objection to the PR is that it is so outrageously sloppy: full of jargon (which you allude to), incorrect punctuation, incorrect capitalization, incorrect names, and incoherent sentences.
One good thing about it, though, is that I laugh out loud every time I read “Main Street Carpet Lounge.” Carpet Lounge?? Even as I type this, it’s making me laugh. They got the name right later in the PR: it’s the Main Event Red Carpet Lounge. It happens to be on Main Street, which I guess confused the person who wrote the PR.
