Something about the cover letter I don't like. Maybe it seems needed. I can't put my finger on the problem.
I think it is because he's trying to be poetic with it, that's the way it is done in France, but in Canada, you get right to the point, I think.
Anyway, any suggestions are welcome. He has Canada on his mind, doesn't care where (might be so he can get away from my ex-wife, his mother)
I don't care if I'm ignored... the final outcome will justify my actions and speak for themselves