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Re: Snackman post# 15895

Thursday, 10/30/2003 11:03:24 PM

Thursday, October 30, 2003 11:03:24 PM

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Snackman--In my opinion, the version you propose fails. It fails because it is way too technical. Anyone reading it not well-versed in tech jargon is going to become cross-eyed by the second paragraph. The introduction should be clear, simple and direct. Admittedly not an easy task.

WAVEs EMBASSY = THE COMMON DENOMINATOR "SWISS" DEFACTO PLATFORM FOR TRUSTED WEB SERVICES

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