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Re: justfrank post# 23138

Tuesday, 04/04/2006 1:32:27 PM

Tuesday, April 04, 2006 1:32:27 PM

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Slightly different, an improvement.

There are two slight differences in the headline.

"concludes" is omitted. It was confusing to say "initial pilot concludes", when the pilot itself had not concluded. In this case, "concludes" added nothing, and was confusing.

"cordless" was added. It was misleading to say "with regular household telephone", when a cordless phone is necessary to receive the signal.

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