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05/09/13 10:06 AM

#45193 RE: ScrChamp606 #45191

And that is what is wrong with these PRs, the way they are worded makes you want to question them.

If you separate them out though and drop the "hope to in the future" junk they add to it they are very big accomplishments and all are concrete.

It is concrete that they signed a Letter of Intent with Cu'i Watermelon Drink.

It is a fact that they have developed new sauces and they should have left the part about hoping to manufacture them in the future. If you present it as EEDG CHEF DEVELOPS NEW WING SAUCES then it seems awesome.

It is a fact that they have begun the process to change the name to RBBI but they need to put it in concrete steps like "EEDG Submits Paperwork for name change to RBBI" rather than we've begun the process and it will be completed sometime soon.

With the Big Chow Grill thing they need to present steps. Rather than saying we are nearing a formal agreement say EEDG BEGINS DD ON BIG CHOW GRILL and then put how long this DD process will take.

They are doing awesome things and getting stuff done, it's just not being presented in the best way.