Replies to post #37256 on NeoMedia Technologies, Inc (NEOM)

[Zacked]

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SOG, That is a great letter, although I think you need to get more to the point in your introductory letters and get rid of the clutter, the verbose flowery words. In other words, cut to the chase. You will lose them otherwise. Everyone is very busy "as you well know." Do you know the rule of keeping introductory letters to one page? Maybe it does fit on one page, but it is a little complicated. Some people are too smart to keep it simple. I know that's you. Just my opinion. Take it for what its worth. lol

The shortest letter I liked was:

"Your check, sir."

[pvc]

SOG. While I agree (only) slightly with Zacks comments re keeping it short, as long as you capture their imagination in the first paragraph, they will read on.

My comments are to compliment you in adopting a very iHub-esque protocol of literary standards.

If the use of "imho" was not uniquely professional, the singing off as "sonofGODZILLA" will no doubt give you the attention, if not credibility, you were seeking.

Either way, good for you for making the effort and if he looks at the compelling info you gave him, Im sure he will be impressed!

Bravo!

pvc

[lesnshawn]

SOG: If I haven't said it before, you ARE the Marketing MACHINE (not to mention THE DD MONSTER!!!)

Many Thanx for your heart-felt efforts here! lns

"LET'S ROCK" and "KEEP THE GOOD TIMES ROLLIN'!" ;)