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Wayne R

08/29/21 5:27 PM

#63 RE: ottoman #60

I will submit it somewhere. You can critique it before. Some changes will probably need to be made.

Wayne R

08/29/21 6:05 PM

#64 RE: ottoman #60


Chapter 5, showdown
With the fires burning and everyone in panic, I managed to get into a garage. Ok now comes the hard part . no shooting so far, but now I have to go out guns blazing.
Locked and loaded, a 45 in each hand and an uzi strapped to my waist I left the garage.
Strangely, there was no one between the garage and the front door. Even stranger, no one inside the hallway. With what little information I had, I figured that Hopi should be on the second level.

I seemed to have the run of the place, so I bounded up the stairs with reckless abandon and found Hopi’s office. Bursting through the door, I said Hopi, you are done, pointing the gun at him.

Hopi said, oh no, you are done. Those nano bots in the vaccine you took can be set to explode at any time I’m afraid, my friend, that yours will explode in 2 seconds.

That is when I died.

Wayne R

08/29/21 6:21 PM

#65 RE: ottoman #60

Well that's it, a few refinements and that is that.

The hero gets the girl is overdone, so I just decided that my character should die, having accomplished nothing.