I find it pretty funny - that since no one can produce any facts to support that NGCG is a scam - the last resort is to attack his grammar - which if anyone read it - it was well written.
So you think the second sentence is (run on) - that isn't close to being accurate.
That is it - for 5 paragraphs - this is the attack on Kim. Now that is funny.
I guess when there isn't any facts to support Kim being involved in a scam - the only thing left is to attack his grammar - it actually seems very well written - maybe written very quickly.
At least everyone understands that the attacks on Kim are unfounded.