real468,
I think this is a great idea, especially if something comes of it!!!!!!!!!
If you go with your original last section, then change "and must here many a great idea," to read "and hear many great ideas"
And I think "change" should be "changed" but I'm not sure.
You may also want to leave plenty of contact info for the company and maybe even mention somewhere that Atwec is a minority owned striving company. Oprah may eat that up!
Anyhow, I wish you the best for all of out sakes
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