I think the second sentence should be re worded slightly.I doubt 60 min will take the CAPS seriously and saying theft should be replaced with improper management of the company's capital. I know I would write if off if someone set me that but that's just me. But good letter I hope something occurs from it.
Excellent work writing CBS 60 minutes. This is our way of bringing light on the the truth which the gov is fighting hard to suppress in Judge Sweeney's court. IMO