Hall of Fame Beverages, Inc (HFBG)

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Sorry bud, but I think I know how to correct grammar.

Pick your poison...

- "Weeks" needs an apostrophe

- The word "agressive" needs the word "an" before it

- The word "garners" needs to be future tense

- There is a subject verb disagreement in the last part, where the demographic is mentioned as singular, but the word "provide" is written as plural.

- The sentence is one long run-on sentence.

- There are many poor choices of words in the sentence.


If you ask me, sounds like Ross wrote this himself. But I guess we'll never know who really did, since it wasn't signed.

Regardless of how poorly this letter was written, it's certainly not something I would want to see from a company that's planning on uplisting and bringing in more business relations/distribution partners.