02 Secure Wireless, Inc. (OTOW)

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O2 Secure Wireless, Inc. Enters Into Lease Agreement to Penetrate Highly Desired Territory in Pembroke Pines Florida

Highly desired? Says who? Poor poor journalistic technique. If OTOW is going to use PR's, it needs to use less corny, hokey, and cheesy lines.

A more profressional way to state it would be 'O2 Secure Wireless, Inc. Enters Into Lease Agreement to Penetrate Territory in Pembroke Pines Florida' and then use a secondary source to describe the territory as 'highly desirable'. In its current form, it's more of a sales pitch instead of a disbursement of information.