Hey Dean..
"Your press releases have spelling and grammar mistakes are not written according to standard format. Almost every release I have read has some sort of grammar mistake and the news is not written to excite the reader.
I am wondering if someone proof reads these for grammar and if the person writing the release knows the correct format and knows how to include a professional statement a company official that shows the company has vision and has a future. "
If you are going to lecture people about grammar, you might want to use proper grammar. For instance:
"Your press releases have spelling and grammar mistakes are not written according to standard format."
Huh?
"I am wondering if someone proof reads these for grammar and if the person writing the release knows the correct format and knows how to include a professional statement a company official that shows the company has vision and has a future. "
First, 'proofreads' is one word. The rest of this run-on sentence is nonsense.
(3) Advertising
Sex Sells, Do you remember Snapple, no one every heard of it until Howard Stern, when he was a nobody promoted it and the rest is history.
This is gibberish, as well.
"This will be like similar"
OK, pal. Speak English much?
Here's another:
". The piranha ( no body can spell this,"
Let's see. You start a sentence with a period, then insert a parentheses with nothing to close it, 'no body' is one word and the sentence just randomly ends with a comma.
"(5) Youtube video. you posted to shareholders????????"
Here's a hint, Mr. "me,a university business professor,a business consultant, and some successful companies I have run." Professional adults don't type 8 question marks at the end of sentences.
"In Los Angeles, there is a Tack Truck literally on every street corner. "
Cool! A Tack Truck? I guess if you want to buy some tack you are all set.
If I was in business and received an unsolicited email from someone with such remarkably poor writing, grammar and spelling skills as yourself, especially one laughingly claiming to be a professor, I would toss it in the trash as a joke. You have no business advising anyone about presentation. Your own is pathetic and barely literate and nobody with an ounce of business sense would take you seriously.
You should try "proof reading" your own output.
AI
