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Re: Ataglance2 post# 20134

Monday, 03/03/2008 1:10:10 PM

Monday, March 03, 2008 1:10:10 PM

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Not criticizing at all just proofing...

On a quick scan, the term "investment" sounds better than "money".

"Every day there is a number of unlimited opportunities"
Doesn't read well.

Am wary of the term "instantly".

24 hours a day you clarify but it's often left out that it's
only 5 days a week.

I didn't see where proofreaders get the discounted fee structure?
Hehe.

Good job!

Best regards,
JL




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