These mistakes that keep being made within the text that is being displayed on the web site are rampant. His folks need to do better than this.
Under "Franchise"
At this time, we expect this restaurant to be the model for our franchised restaurants.
It is the model, not expected to be the model.
For those interested in franchising, we are currently.available in 29 States (listed below).
The words "we are currently . available" should not have a comma between the two words. To write "we are currently . available" makes no sense. It should say "Uwink has franchises currently available."
As we begin our franchise operations in the United States ,we are also proceeded with the registeration process to offer franchises internationally as well.
The words "we are also proceeded" is grammatically incorrect. It should say "we are also proceeding." Then the word "registration" is misspelled as "registeration"
Under "Bistro"
Fun isn’t fun if you’re staring at a blank wall, twiddling your thumbs.
What sense does "fun isn't fun" make? Just say that staring at a blank wall is not fun, instead.
It’s hip, and there’s an edge of technology, but it’s not overwhelming, more of a scent.
Why in the world would anyone describe Uwink as "more of a scent?" That is ridiculous.
You walk in. It’s not lit too brightly, but not dungeon-dark like (ugh) an arcade.
Why put "(ugh)" in the sentence at all? Again, it sounds ridiculous. The sentence also has a double negative in it.
The Company plans to open its first restaurant location in Los Angeles in 2006, with one additional location shortly thereafter.
The Company "plans to open." Why are comments like this still on the web site. This makes it obvious that the information is very old and the people writing it are very sloppy with the details.
*** When you stop getting better, you're no longer good ***
