Pacific Sands Inc (fka PFSD)

[Oxonius]

Well, folks, someone is paying attention: all three of my petty gripes below have been fixed as of this morning. The job is not quite complete, however, as there is a (redundant) sub-tab under the "About Us" tab called "Our Story" which repeats the text from the other page - which means it repeats the mistakes; so, this page needs to be fixed also (though I'm not really sure why the page is needed at all).

We have to assume that all posts are being read by the company so I would encourage all supporters of PFSD to post whatever advice, help, suggestions etc. that they can as there will be an audience and they may choose to respond with an action. It is, of course, quite ridiculous that a group of shareholders (who probably control half of the stock) can only contact the company using a one-way channel of public posting on a penny stock board. My preference would be to consult privately with the company, but until such time as they contact me, this will have to suffice.

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So, now it's time to move onto the Oxyboost website. Not sure who's in charge, but it will take about 5 minutes to fix the typos and formatting errors:

<< At Pacific Sands Inc. we manufacture household and commercial cleaners and spa chemicals that work as well or better than the big national brands, but are eco-friendly, biodegradable, and healthy for your and your family.

Our product line-up includes:
- Oxy-boost ultra-concentrated oxygen bleach stain eliminator
- Natural Choices green cleaners to make your house sparkle inside and out.
- Ecoone pool and spa treatment system that leaves your water safe and your skin smooth and baby-soft.

All our proprietary formulations use natural-based ingredients that are effective and powerful yet gentle to you and the environment. >>

http://www.oxyboost.com/aboutus.asp

First para needs "you" instead of "your". Second para uses inconsistent font sizes (which you can't see from my copy). Third para needs a comma after "powerful".