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Tuesday, 06/17/2014 6:01:22 AM

Tuesday, June 17, 2014 6:01:22 AM

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As an investor who is long - present share count is 132000 and buying more when I can - I am disappointed a better job wasn't done with regard to the website. There are errors in grammar and punctuation that can cause some to think the website is unprofessionally done. Frankly, seeing such errors could perk unnecessary doubt regarding the legitimacy of this brand.

As an example, the following is from the products page:

"Coffee Lovers have been seeking on an all-natural product that will boost energy naturally Many health conscience consumers have switched from dairy to non-dairy alternatives, a healthier alternative to synthetic flavored creamers and powders. Consumers who don’t want energy drinks due to large amounts of sugar are turning to energy shots for healthy, functional boost in energy."

The statement has some errors that makes this look unprofessional. The first error is, "Coffee Lovers". Lovers should not be capitalized. The next error is, "Coffee Lovers have been seeking on..." I think they wanted to say, "Coffee lovers have been seeking a..."

The next error is that there is a period missing between the words naturally, and Many.

The last error is the omission of the word "a" in the sentence Consumers who don’t want energy drinks due to large amounts of sugar are turning to energy shots for healthy, functional boost in energy." It should read, "...energy shots for a healthy..."

Four errors in such a short statement creates suspicion regarding the professionalism of those who created and in those monitoring the website.

I've written them and hope they change it.
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